from
The Times-Picayune
published Nov. 23,
2002
Critic: David
Cuthbert
'Grandma'
has her moments
Not Without
Grandma is a mildly diverting original comedy-drama written and
directed by Susan Price Monnot. As a playwright, Monnot has a tart but
essentially gentle voice and a tendency to stretch her story out unnecessarily.
The play would benefit from a knowing director to help trim her two-act,
12-scene, two-hour opus into a more compact entertainment and also provide
more energy and pace. The play has its moments, but they're buried in too
much verbiage and not enough action.
Monnot is not without
talent, however. At the end of the first act, she creates a genuinely dramatic
outcry of emotion that is then topped with a humorous line and both work.
That kind of juxtaposition isn't an easy thing to bring off.
One of her themes
here is the defensive tactics the elderly take to get by in life. It's
the kind of plot that Harvey writer Mary Chase explored in
a little-known play called Midgie Purvis, where a middle-aged
woman finds it easier to pretend to be much older.
In
Not
Without Grandma, the title character, Flo, is a passive-aggressive
biddy who has her daughter Lizzy and granddaughter April at her beck and
call because she has them believing she's a semi-invalid. And the granddaughter's
boyfriend has an apparently demented uncle who may not
be as daft as he
lets on.
The mutually ennabling
family of three women seems to at least to be functioning until Lizzy contracts
terminal cancer just as April is accepted into medical school. April hires
a caregiver named Mrs. Vinderbaum, who with her outsider's eye, sees things
as they really are. Or is she a Teutonic Mary Poppins, who goes where she's
needed and then moves on?
Some of Monnot's
solutions are a bit pat, with a tacked-on feminist addendum that plays
like a speech from a 20-year-old TV movie. But the playwright-director
can also create real moments of theatrical
effectiveness, such
as April's nightmare, when all her troubles close in on her in a dream
swirl of voice-overs. And the play can be quite funny, because a sly old
woman putting everyone down as she puts one over on them is fairly foolproof
stuff.
Besides being too
long, the play's main problem is that it's played too casually. When Donald
Loupe as the maybe mental Uncle Matt appears, the audience perks up because
he brings real vitality to the stage. The same
thing happens when Vatican Lokey injects some brief comic life as a driving
instructor.
Avis Conti's Grandma
is a subtle, amusing old fraud, but it would be nice to see her put more
bite into her insult comedy. The appealing Joy Chun makes April's anguish
real, but she has to be careful not to slip into a whiney mode. Michael
Miller exudes confident, boyish brio as George, April's beau who takes
an awful lot of abuse only to be held at arm's length at the end of the
play. Lisette Bayle plays both the fading Lizzy and the take-charge Mrs.
Vinbderbaum, who bears more than a passing
resemblance -- in
appearance and plot function -- to Robin Williams' "Mrs. Doubtfire."
Monnot has also supplied
some catchy tunes that bridge her scenes, one of which, Remember When
has an insistent French music hall feel to it. The play has been capably
produced, with good light and sound contributions from Vic Woodward and
costumes by Cindy Duplass which deftly chart the characters' emotional
states.
Not Without
Grandma is not without merit or charm, but like Grandma herself,
it could use a good swift kick to get it off its duff.
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